Band by band

• Format1/2

  You included the school name and date, but your title exceeded three words and you omitted both the box and your designation.

• Content1.5/2

  You provided the event, date, time, and venue, but did not specify whom to submit names to or the deadline.

• Expression0/1

  You used the first person in 'I am happy to announce', made a spelling error with 'there', and exceeded the 50–70 word limit.

Format checklist

• ✗ A box — No box was drawn around the notice.
• ✓ Name of the school or body — MODEL PUBLIC SCHOOL, SAMPLE TOWN is correctly centred at top.
• ✓ The word NOTICE — Correctly centred in capital letters on its own line.
• ✓ Date — Date of issue is correctly placed on the left.
• ✗ Title — Title is seven words long and not underlined; limit is three words.
• ✓ Body — Contains key details but lacks contact person and deadline.
• ✗ Signature block — Name is present, but designation (e.g. Art Secretary) is missing.

Line by line

Next time

1. Always draw a box around your complete notice before submitting.
2. Keep your creative title to 3 words or fewer, underline it, and never add 'Thank you' at the end.
3. Add a designation (e.g., Cultural Secretary) directly below your name in the signature block.